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Gregory said:
Definitely Toss: Lacks Excellence
Certainly a future contender, but needs to keep trying.
Mitch said:
Definitely Keep: Personal Account
You have to wonder how some people make it safely out of the house every morning.
Glen said:
Neutral: Personal Account
well i wonder where the genes came from.
Tracy said:
Neutral: Personal Account
I like the bit at the end, where the dad asks the scout leader to take him to hospital. This kid is a future DA!
R&B said:
Definitely Toss: Personal Account
A more detailed, and funny, write up could make this a contender - especially if the protagonist meets the test of maturity. (The bit about his Dad fearing accusations of abuse is a nice detail).
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